ルーヴル美術館展　ルネサンス　（国立新美術館）の口コミ

對，那就不應該寫 “especially during busy periods”，因為你的重點反而是：早上、人潮並沒有特別多，現場卻還是因為動線和停留方式而顯得混亂。

我會改成：

Although I visited in the morning when it was not particularly crowded, the visitor flow still felt somewhat disorganized. In particular, many people stayed in front of the artworks for a long time without moving, making it difficult for other visitors to view the works. I hope the organizers can improve the layout and visitor flow so that people can move around and enjoy the exhibition more smoothly.